Hmm, I have yet to have a chance to play this map on a server with other people, so I can't fully comment on gameplay, but by the looks of things, gameplay should work OK. My main gripe is how the blu team can exit their spawn in any direction, this could get very confusing for first time players and they will end up wasting lots of time going the wrong way. To solve this, limit which ways the Blu team can exit their spawn in accordance to where the cart is.

My other issue on gameplay is how the map has no alternate routes, you are rather forced to follow the tracks, this could make it hard for Spy's and other attackers to flank the other team, which could make moving the cart very very difficult and limits defending options.

Starting with the ambience, this map seems to lack it, there is no distinctive style to it, yes it feels like TF2 and yes it has the red vs blue feeling to it. However what I don't like is that it doesn't feel like there are two hidden bases looking at each other, it just seems like a generic map for the purpose of playing the game in.

Design, is alright, the main issues are the large blue wall of blu base with nothing on it, it is just a massive boring wall. Also, you used a lot of tall cliffs to block in the map which does get a little repetitive and boring, try using some fences and open into a much larger world to give some more eye candy.

Detail is a little low actually, I was hoping for some more detail, but then again it is a beta. Make sure you really add in a lot more detail and make it much more interesting to look at, some additional cover could be useful and some of the spaces are very enclosed, which should be made wider.

Looks wise, it is pretty good, you have some interesting geometry here and there and there are not many blank walls, so there is always something to look at. However there is just the feeling that you could be doing so much more with the map that you are currently not exploiting.

Overall, it is a solid map, it works, but does feel a little claustrophobic and has some gameplay issues that may need to be addressed. There is some potential in this map and I am hoping for something good in the next release.

This is a moderate level map. It has some level of detail, but does suffer from some problems.

The gameplay is rather simple, run around the crates and kill what ever you can see. The map is very balanced, but that comes from being a reflection of itself.

The map is moderately fun to play, though there isn't anything special about it. Mediocrity is the name of the game here and its a shame.

Texturing and lighting is what I come to expect from about every other map released on FPSB, a texture map, with a skybox that has simple lighting.

The map could do with a 3D skybox and could do with a lot more detail in the way of props, regular textures and decals. Soundscapes would also help a map just be that little bit better. It is all of these little jobs that take just 5 minutes to help make a map much more than just this.

Overall, a solid attempt at mapping, but nothing that will stand out from the crowd of hundreds of similar maps.

Ummm, wow, this map has a real air of poor quality. A little tip for anyone reading this, you never release your first map, you will always need to have made several working maps before you should consider anything release worthy.

Starting with the texturing is it just so unbelievably random. There is no recurring theme, there is no overall feel of the map, it doesn't line up properly, there is no evidence of alignment either. It has the feeling of being rushed with no care paid to detail or quality.

The layout too, feels pretty random in places and there is evidence of some carving in the map. Brushwork is atrocious in some places, with gaps everywhere.

There is no lighting in the map, not even a lame attempt at using the light_environment entity, which in 2 seconds would add at least some light to this map. Well, actually it wouldn't seeing as there is no skybox in this map.

Really, you need, you must check out the tutorial section of this site, learn how to make a decent map and actually put a lot of time into making something that is actually passable. Check out other modding sites too, they all have useful tutorials that you can learn from.

A solid map, it's fun to play, but does present limited options in the terms of tactics and gameplay. It does remind me a little of awp_india in term of gameplay and design.

I am a bit of a sucker for custom content in maps and I really enjoy seeing it being used. However, the idea of Lego blocks has been done before and better. The brushwork is very blocky and I would like to see some more interesting architecture in the map.

The map is a little small really and this does have a negative impact on gameplay, this map may be good for 1v1 or 2v2, but any more and the map becomes too cramped. I don't understand the idea of the bomb site, I would remove it for the next version if I we're you.

For the next version, make the map larger and use some more interesting brush work, add more custom content, get the 3D skybox in there and add cubemaps (very important).

The lighting is basic and I would like to see some actual shadows in the map, use a light_environment correctly and add some lights under the bridge too.

Overall, an interesting map to play, but there are noticeable gameplay issues and there is a lot of potential a map like this could have, which you have no yet unlocked. Keep mapping and keep learning new stuff to do.

This seems like an ok map, there is nothing special about it and it doesn't really make itself knows from the other thousands of dust style maps running about.

Firstly, the map just doesn't look that great, texturing is pretty repetitive in places, especially the underground area. Get some decals in there and use some textures out of the dust set, there are some good ones that could fit right in with this map.

Lighting is pretty basic, you have managed to get actual sources of light there. However, the lighting doesn't suit and it doesn't work well either, it is too dark inside, it needs to be a little brighter.

A 3D skybox could really benefit this map in the outdoor areas and would help to remove the horrible 'boxing in' effect you created with the unrealistic high walls.

Gameplay wise, it is passable, yet pretty unbalanced, I'd say take more time when considering the maps layout and try to think of getting some really balanced gameplay in the map.

More time is needed on this map, sort out out some obvious issues like the invalid spawns and spend more time on the detail inside and outside of the map area, especially in the underground area.

Overall, an OK map, there are a lot of rough edges that need to be fixed up. Just spend more time on your maps next time and continually test them to get a great map by the time of release.