Pros: you have the very basics of the map down, you have some props which adds some detail, some lights and what not
Cons: the lights show through the walls, the brushwork isn't very good, not much detail, you can see the bottom of the skybox, no radar, no 3d sky, no custom skybox, no lighting (light_environment)
Improvements: fix the lighting, make more complex brushwork, make a 3d skybox, make it so you can't see the edge of the map, add more entities, for ss show the entire map, not just corners and places that don't show anything for ex the corner of the room, the bloody board, also take an overview of the map
Notes: this map is far from completed, but don't give up on it because i didn
t rate it what you might have wanted, keep working on it add detail lighting and what not and if you get stuck or need some help drop by mapjunkies.com and we will help you with anything you need at all. I hope to see an updated version of this soon