I'm considering adding stairwells to the ends of the long hall and creating a room network above leading to the bomb site, this might aleviate the need for another bomb site and will give the desired alternate routes.

I have watched this map evolve from day 1 and know the amount of work that was put into it's making. It's nice to see the constructive comments made. After reading about the 1 bomb site I must agree but I don't know where a 2nd site could be placed.
Cracking map Pezza and I will upload it before weekend m8 (hopefully tonight) ;)

Ah, Gears of War. Nice little remake, didn't even notice the connection from the screenshots, once loaded into the game however I picked up on that right away.

Very nice recreation, visually it looks fine, gameplay wise I have one issue though, there is a single bombsite and to get to it you need to use two ladders, there is no other way that I can see to get to that height, which makes it incredibly unfair to which ever team first gains control of the site, they can camp and kill anyone that comes up before they get a shot off.

That hurts the map a lot, the layout is still pretty much the original GOW map but with your new areas which are neat.

The soundscape you have is a tad overbearing after a while, little too loud and constant. Some inside and outside soundscapes would help with that, just to remove the repetitiveness of it.

Other than that, use of textures, decals, overlays, brushwork and models is fantastic. models just seem a tad spammed at the bombsite but the rest of the map makes up for that.

The map doesn't really need a 3d skybox because of the high buildings covering most of it anyways but for the canal exits on either spawn, some sort of extension to show it continuing would be good.

For your first source map, not bad but could be better of course :P