Pros: its a snipermap, almost plays well
Cons: it looks awefull
Improvements: more details, more probs, everything prolly
Notes: just spend more time on your maps, you showed that u can create something playable - just learn some more tricks and get some routine with the editor and i believe u can do something well.

This looks like a good TF2 map. I like the layout of it. This should be a really good map to test out sniping on. I like the ammount of detail you put onto the buildings.

Herre are a few things you can choose to work on.

1. Use of props. The map would look a whole lot better if there were more props on it.

2. The lighting. It does look like you have lighting in this map, but it doesnt look very good, so you might want to improve it a little map, maybe put it outside on the middle structure, and you could turn that into a gas station type thing. Its up to you.

3. The blockyness of it. I dont know if you meant to make it like this, but it seems way too blocky for me. You should try rounding some things out, like the corners of the buildings, and the pillars for the middle structure.

Hope this helped!